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I'm on a Boat by stalydan I'm on a Boat by stalydan
Now finished! :D

I think the joke is self-explanatory XD
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toonlink1 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2011
Great concept and such, I feel like it needs a lot of improvement though.

Personal quirk of mine, I don't think the muscles look good at all. Stylistically speaking now, the torso is off, I can't put my hand on it though. The tunic isn't positioned correctly, based on the wind direction. The ruffles make it seem as if the wind is blowing the opposite direction that the sail indicates.

Regardless, it's a good pun. I may try something like this...:P
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stalydan Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, the main bit I really focused on was on the King of Red Lions and the water effects. I think I did them quite well but unfortunately made me neglect Toon Link's anatomy. My main concern is the arms, they seem very disjointed. Like wise, the legs don't feel right either :/
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toonlink1 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2011
I see, and you did particularly well in those areas, in fact, I don't even want to touch them in a critique.
And I feel as though the arms wouldn't be disjointed if the wind effects on the tunic were drawn differently. Regardless, it's a good piece overall. As for the legs, They seem to be drawn stylistically in the Wind Waker fashion, whilst the torso was drawn in a different style. may be why they don't seem right :)
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stalydan Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, the shoulders look very broad and box like, it doesn't seem to fit with it. And the tunic does look wrong in comparison to the wind direction. I should try one day to maybe correct that bit, it'd probably look a bit better.
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Kid-Umby Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2011
What's up with his legs?
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stalydan Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, I focused too much on drawing the King of Red Lions and did mess up quite a bit of Toon Link's anatomy :/
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toonlink1 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2011
They're actually the only thing on him drawn stylistically correct(at least with the cartoony style the Wind Waker has)
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totallyshmoo5 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2010
n!ce > like it <3
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Author-Bat-Pegasus Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Where does the "I'm on a Boat" Joke come from?
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stalydan Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Please tell me you're trolling D:

You've never heard of The Lonely Island song?
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