Great concept and such, I feel like it needs a lot of improvement though.
Personal quirk of mine, I don't think the muscles look good at all. Stylistically speaking now, the torso is off, I can't put my hand on it though. The tunic isn't positioned correctly, based on the wind direction. The ruffles make it seem as if the wind is blowing the opposite direction that the sail indicates.
Regardless, it's a good pun. I may try something like this...
Yeah, the main bit I really focused on was on the King of Red Lions and the water effects. I think I did them quite well but unfortunately made me neglect Toon Link's anatomy. My main concern is the arms, they seem very disjointed. Like wise, the legs don't feel right either :/
I see, and you did particularly well in those areas, in fact, I don't even want to touch them in a critique. And I feel as though the arms wouldn't be disjointed if the wind effects on the tunic were drawn differently. Regardless, it's a good piece overall. As for the legs, They seem to be drawn stylistically in the Wind Waker fashion, whilst the torso was drawn in a different style. may be why they don't seem right
Yeah, the shoulders look very broad and box like, it doesn't seem to fit with it. And the tunic does look wrong in comparison to the wind direction. I should try one day to maybe correct that bit, it'd probably look a bit better.